oregongirl

Great poem! :) I liked it! Didn't I tell you that I would critique some of your work. wa la I am here! :elephant:

I loved this! :D Good description and I certainly liked it a lot! :) Good Job! :) :elephant:

Hey I liked your poem a lot! :elephant: It was very simple and that's what I liked about it. :) :D

I loved this song a lot! Great Job! :) except one little thing: Weren't is spelled wrong in the sentence ' If only we wern't caught on this wave.' Great ...

WOW! :shock: This describes basically the "friendship" I had last year with a rich kid at my school. Good job! :) I am loving your writing and can't wait to ...

Wow! :shock: good job! I really liked this poem! Excellent description and I love the part where you were talking about the black hole and the shovel of grief! wooo! ...

Good description on this! :D I really liked it! I felt the point that you were trying to make well done! :) Keep it up!

good description in this :) Are you going to be starting something with this or is it just going to be a paragraph? :? But good job on describing things ...

Great description. :o I don't really know if you're trying to start something or if its a paragraph though. :?

WOW!!! :shock: GREAT JOB! I loved it! I am very excited to hear more of this. :D Great job on describing things it was wonderful I can't say anything else ...

I liked this a lot. The thing I liked the best was how you described things. :) This is the first one that I have read but I would like ...

This was a great small piece of writing. I liked it very much. Maybe make it a little longer if you want to turn it into a story or something. ...

Wow great story starter I think! you should most definitely make a story out of this! Great Job! The description was very good about the alley I loved it! :D

It was really good :D I liked this story a lot and the picture was funny :lol:

This is great! I have been reading these, they are very good. Very good description and good job on relating to single mothers trying to find a good man. Great ...