onthesurface93

Hey again! :) Thanks for the clarification about mistakes, was a little confused! It really helped, because I'm really addicted to this story and just want it to be the ...

And what spelling mistakes did you notice? I only thought of 'magick', but in my story thats how I'm spelling it. Help me out? Thanks. :)

Thanks for the review! No offense taken, honestly its fine I prefer constructive critisism rather than someone telling me its good when its not. So I know what you mean ...

Once again, thanks very much for the kind words! Often what makes sense to me doesn't always make sense to everyone else, so that's okay! I'll definitely try cutting back ...

Thanks for the review! It may seem a little confusing, but I've written a lot more of the story and it becomes first person, it's about the girl herself and ...

Wow! Thank you SOOOOO much! I honestly didn't expect such amazing feedback! I've got loads more of the story written, so I'll definitely post some more! Great tips, exactly the ...