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  • Poetry » Narrative, Romantic Re: Tropical Storm

    This is truly stunning. The use of enjambent is really powerful, as it introduces a pause at the end of the line - "like... cold coffee in the morning." It's ...

    Feb 19, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Mosaic of life.

    This is incredibly beautiful; it's very simplistic, and that's what I love. Describing life in the form of a "mosaic" is very intriguing. I love the use of sibilant sounds ...

    Feb 19, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Razor Blade

    This is really heart-wrenching. I like the way it assesses all of the different literal uses of a razor blade and then gradually we discover it's darkest use towards the ...

    Feb 18, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, Romantic Re: Closure

    I really enjoy the simplicity of this. It's beautiful, yet in a subtle and hidden kind of way; it's certainly open to the interpretation that it's hiding a lot more ...

    Feb 17, 2014


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