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Hi Jared! Liked the overall feel of this piece and am looking forward to reading more but there are a few things to comment on so here goes!!! “Edward Pastor, ...

Hi! Thanks for your PM and of course I'll review things...I love to review...I must warn you that poetry isn't particularly my strong point but I will give it a ...

Hi seems I have timed this just right since you have just edited it! She watched, mesmerized, as the sky darkened as if a sudden black blanket was thrown over ...

Sorry it took me so long to get here! It's been a bit busy round these parts! Lol! I'm here now so here's what I think of your really good ...

Too short my dear! You can't have a short paragraph as a whole chapter...well you can...but I just don't like it! Lol! At least I'm honest! You're punctuation is lacking ...

Woah! I'm not even going to review this until it's set out properly (new speaker new line)and posted in two sections as it is massively long! Just a tip for ...

I liked this, a lot in fact....Really got a feel for the characters and wanted to whack Brannon one for being such a **** lol! I'm really glad Lucy stood ...

Nice piece with lots of fantastic detail but the lack of punctuation and ridiculously long sentences made it so hard to read. I had to really concentrate and it was ...

This is a bit arty farty in its content for me to actually enjoy reading such a piece but this is just personal opinion. All things considered....I was very shocked ...

I agree with ashleylee here... Nice little plot and whatnot but we need to get to know the main character a bit better so we, as readers, can relate... The ...

I really want to know more about your such a small amount of words you hint at so much...i wish it was used as a foreshadowing tool...that means I want ...

Quite keen on this myself...though for some reason, I didn't think i was going to be from the kind of put me off but I couldn't tell you might be ...

Blah blah blah blah blah! See all my previous reviews full of positive adjectives and apply them to this one too! I'm not saying I prefer this to the other ...

Liked the idea of this...it's very different which I appreciate... It's half article and half almost epistolary story...which is a nice but surprising combination...If you had described this to me ...

I quite liked it, though wish there was more....lol...I am somewhat confused though... Is Jame a name or is it a typo? It could well be a name I just ...