olivia1987uk

Very nice! I rarely read the poetry on here as I tend to stick to my romantic fiction but I think this is lovely! It's made me want a little ...

Writing can stem from anything, no matter how bad you think the prompt is! But anyway, I like the idea...I bet most people would think of writing it from the ...

Not a bad piece at all...not something I'd usually enjoy reading but I can appreciate how well written it is.... just noticed the odd thing Joyous light, it blinds my ...

I'm in a real "imagery mood" at the moment and this was just the thing to read under the circumstances. I love descriptive pieces! They are my favourite kind and ...

Wow, I'm Olivia too! What are the chances! Haha! The other Olivia seems to have picked out what I would have commented on but I have to say I liked ...

Well done for this piece...Bittersweet picked up on all the problems I noticed in terms of grammar and whatnot so all that it is left for me to do is ...

Hey, I like you're writing style and I'm really glad you've joined YWS! Hope you enjoy it here! Anyway, there are a few suggestions I am going to make about ...

As usual very very nice! You don't need to pretend the PM never happened! You have such insight Andrew, seriously! The title is very intriguing and the colloquial style of ...

I'm fed up of complimenting your work young man but I feel it is too good to simply overlook it! You have such a way of portraying such emotion it's ...

I like the idea of this and I can see what you mean about it being addictive to write. There are so many ways you could go with it and ...

There is nothing I specifically did not like about this piece although I agree with a few of the comments other people had made in their reviews...I won't reiterate them ...

I do love this and can't really pick fault with i other than the fact that it ended! Are you intending carrying this on or is this it? Either way ...

Right, I am back, as promised! :D Felt bad for not being able to do it last night but I knew I'd have been conked out face down on my ...

“It’ll be okay Don,” I replied, trying my best to comfort. I would say "trying my best to comfort her "...just flows better in my opinion she breathed, more to ...

It's a very intriguing prologue, I must say....Really got me hooked and I hope you post more soon...spotted a couple of minor things but nothing major needs a change as ...