olivia1987uk

Hey Wang Chung! I don't believe I have reviewed your work before so let me just say everything I am going to mention is a suggestion and not a "correction"! ...

Hey The sentiment behind this was fantastic...I don't quite know what made me click on it but I'm so glad I did... Probably cos it said your name Grace but ...

Hey ashleylee Like the idea for this piece and I'd most definitely carry it on if its still on the cards. Nice and different. I like different! Just a few ...

I will review it, not that there's much to comment on, but usually we have a 2:1 review ratio so....start reviewing!!!!!!!! I liked the way you spelt out the words ...

Hey! I know this piece is really short but sometimes I like reviewing these teeny ones...gives me a bit of a break... the places you saw are what made you ...

I'm glad this is the start of something and you're definitely carrying on with it as it is really good...I'm nitpicking with my suggestions here but its up to you ...

How powerful! I'm not usually one to comment on poetry as its not my area of so-called expertise but I liked this...very emotive, even if the language was somewhat repetitive...that ...

I've seen something similar to this on here recently and on a few other places...I think it is going to have be really really well done to succeed holding everybody's ...

Oohh aman with morals! I knew they existed somewhere! Anyway, lol, here's your critique! I turned to him and said, “You so wish you were him, don’t you?” I would ...

cutsie and leaves that warm feeling in your corrections as such but I do have one or two suggestions.... Tons of makeup and green ketchup Don't like the word "tons"...lol ...

I liked your idea except I didn't enjoy reading it as much as I thought I would, however weird that sounds. The capitalisation of "Him", "Her" etc really put me ...

Lol, i liked the sentiment about this and I think the two previous reviewers have picked out everything I would have done... My only problem is, would such a girl ...

Good piece overall, quite enjoyed it! Get me branching out into poetry and science fiction today! Lol...just a few pointers She took out her own sword, which was much heavier ...

Love the emotion behind this! Kudos to you because I'm not usually a poetry person but the more time I spend in this forum the more I'm being converted... I ...

See, I have read a lot about suicide lately, but this definitely has the edge on everything else in my humble opinion... I did notice one little spelling mistake though...let ...