okkervilpuddle

i like it by itself. the reader can add significance to the preceding instances on their own. it gives the story a lot of meaning and a certain intelligence. saying ...

i kind of thought this was a little pretentious and too self-consciously "deep" or whatever.. if this was me i would relax a little bit and let up on the ...

hey, i liked this alright-- you're a good writer, i know that. i mean the writing was very well done and you don't fall in to stupid cliches or anything. ...

the whole thing about the ramen was very funny and very good about setting the narrator's state of mind. i wasn't a fan of the beginning and thought that it ...