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It required too much thought. There were to many double (perhaps even triple, I was too confused to know) negatives. I had to read every line at least four or ...

Very good. The way it was said was easy to understand, and well put. But it was rather vernacular (I don't know if that's an adjective or a noun, but ...

I trained to be lumberjack one time. A :twisted: demon :twisted: lumberjack!!! It sucked. Can doors be made of metal...?

I like it. I didn't really get all of it, though, but that was just because I was destracted while reading it. I love the idea of going back to ...

Yeah, the story was pretty rushed and inconsistant. The bassis was pretty cool, but, you know, I just didn't ... you know, feel it ... I think it needs some ...

I want more now!!! The idea is really awesome. But I don't know what ya'll 'r talkin' about with the 3rd and 1st person stuff. Isn't an omnipitent (I don't ...