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Thank you for your review! Most monologues I have seen normally come in a big paragraph like that but I'm not sure if that's entirely right. I should do some ...

Thank you for your review! The thing with changing from third person to first is purely to show a change from the main character's perspective. There are a few other ...

Thank you for your review! It's very really helpful to have a fellow actor review my work, it not only helps with the written side of the monologue but also ...

Thank you for your review! I'm also thankful you pointed out grammatical errors because everyone says they're there but I can never see them XD

Thank you for your review! Um... Willow and Uri aren't twins, Willow is twins with Markus, the one Uri has a conflict with. The majority of the book is in ...

Oh okay :)

Thank you for your review! Your points were really helpful and I'll see what I can do. Just to clarify, Ash and Jade are mated, that's why they are holding ...

Thank you for your review ^_^ The tremble was trying to indicate how tightly she was holding her wings because she was so angry with him but I can see ...

Thank you for your review! All your points were really helpful ^_^

Thank for your review! I'll take your thoughts into consideration when I revise over this :)

Thank you! ^_^

That's okay, it was a pleasure to read it ^_^

Thank you for your review! When looking through my work I can see what you mean about a lot all of the things, I'll try to improve them accordingly.

Thank you for your review! To answer your problem, this section was originally part of chapter 1 but split them apart. That was probably where you saw Leah mentioned.

Thank you for your review! I glad you liked my idea and thanks for the advice on where to post them next time. To clear up some of your questions, ...