noridori

thank you so much for reading and for the great advice! i definitely struggle with balancing exposition and subtext at times so thanks for pointing that out for me :3 ...

thank you so much for reading and reviewing! though it does seem to be set as a comment rather than a review... hmm, maybe there's a way to change it? ...

thanks for the tips!

thank you so much!! also the letter was from her aunt. i tried to not state things too explicitly to portray that cat already knows what's happening because she's used ...

haha no worries

yeah at least in my opinion

haha yeah, daffadowndilly is like a dialect term for daffodil. thanks for reading!

it does make the timeline clearer but it's slightly clunky, i'd recommend removing one of the 'spent' to avoid repetition. personally i think the clearest and cleanest version is keeping ...

yeah sorry, that part was a bit awkwardly worded on my end. i think what i meant was that the order of things kind of made me stumble over the ...

thank you!

i'm so glad you liked it! whimsical is high praise, high praise indeed... so usually i'm intentionally vague with my poems because i really enjoy people interpreting them but i'll ...

tyy so much!

thank you so much! and happy belated birthday :3

thank you for reading and reviewing! i'm glad you found it worthwhile even if you're not the biggest fan of fish hahah

thank you so much for taking your time to review! and about the rhyming... yeah, that's on me... i'm not too proud to admit this isn't my best work, at ...