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thanks for the tips!

thank you so much!! also the letter was from her aunt. i tried to not state things too explicitly to portray that cat already knows what's happening because she's used ...

haha no worries

yeah at least in my opinion

haha yeah, daffadowndilly is like a dialect term for daffodil. thanks for reading!

it does make the timeline clearer but it's slightly clunky, i'd recommend removing one of the 'spent' to avoid repetition. personally i think the clearest and cleanest version is keeping ...

yeah sorry, that part was a bit awkwardly worded on my end. i think what i meant was that the order of things kind of made me stumble over the ...

thank you!

i'm so glad you liked it! whimsical is high praise, high praise indeed... so usually i'm intentionally vague with my poems because i really enjoy people interpreting them but i'll ...

tyy so much!

thank you so much! and happy belated birthday :3

thank you for reading and reviewing! i'm glad you found it worthwhile even if you're not the biggest fan of fish hahah

thank you so much for taking your time to review! and about the rhyming... yeah, that's on me... i'm not too proud to admit this isn't my best work, at ...

hahah okay, come back around whenever you have time :3

thank you so much! i actually wasn't sure if i liked this one, so i'm so glad to hear someone else enjoying it! also welcome to YWS, i'll look forward ...