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of course! i read it again and i really felt the emotion of the scene without anything pulling me out of the experience, kudos!

thank you so much for reading and reviewing! it's so fun to hear the chapter can still be enjoyable to read without reading the first chapters!

thank you so much for reading and reviewing! and thanks a ton for pointing out the grammar stuff, it's super helpful!

thank you, that is soo kind! freezing point is around 12000 words in total and will likely never be traditionally published because of the length, so i've been thinking about ...

thank you so much for great advice! also this is sort of a spoiler(?) but he's meant to have an old knee injury i struggled to fit here and i ...

relentless like lucas, from the prologue! (yeah i know that line should probably be cut...) anyway, thank you so much for reviewing! this is all great feedback! firstly about the ...

thank you so much for taking reading and reviewing!

thank you so much for taking reading and reviewing!

thank you for reading and reviewing! about the boxes I was actually really struggling to describe it... the idea is that the snow got on the boxes and kind of ...

thank you so much for the advice! i'll definitely take note of this : D

thank you for the review and thanks for reading! I'm glad you liked it :)

thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

thank you so much for reading and reviewing! also that's a really good observation of the characters so far, i'm glad that came across : )

thank you so much for the review! and congrats on being a JM!! :D

thank you so much for reading and for the great advice! i definitely struggle with balancing exposition and subtext at times so thanks for pointing that out for me :3 ...