noridori

i really really enjoyed this piece. it's super atmospheric and mysterious, and it kept me invested the whole way through. it's a great prologue because i'm really curious about the ...

Great opening, in my opinion. I love the way you describe the surroundings. It's very vivid and immersive. 'Darting between loungers, stopping to dip her hands into the pool before ...

such a fun read! i love your writing and the way you build the atmosphere. you're very descriptive and it let's us feel what the narrator is feeling. i really ...

So I just joined and this is the first work I'm reviewing and honestly I enjoyed it a lot. It was very fun to read and the end really caught ...