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I can't say much because I'm in a rush - I don't get to read all of this but what I read was really good :) The viewpoint you've taken ...

haha no worries :)

Thankyou :)

Thanks heaps Laure!! I appreciate your review so much! :)

Thankyou so much for reviewing!! :)

This poem is absolutely beautiful, loved it to bits! It seems so simple, yet it's quite powerful and puts into words how we all feel sometimes. Perhaps a comma after ...

Good point :) keep writing!

hi Dreamwork, In answer to your question, I was trying to convey that not only did the mare leave very suddenly, but she left with notable grace and power...if you ...

thanks RachelLeeAnn! The animal I had pictured was actually a horse, but it really could be a number of animals I suppose. I'm not too fussed about what animal the ...

no worries :) I'm a newbie, so don't take me too seriously (I've obviously missed some backstory here!)

cheers :)