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Re: i am home but i don't know where i am
Ahhh, what a great poem... The message here was so deep and cutting—unable to truly identify who you are despite having all the time in the world to figure yourself ...
Dec 30, 2020 -
Re: The Moment of Hamartia
First off, "hamartia" is such a delicious word. Second off, what a great poem! I particularly enjoyed how the tone really gave off the impression of a spider hunting and ...
Dec 30, 2020 -
Re: Theatre
Let me tell you, this poem PERFECTLY captured musical theater. I'm sure that anyone who has been apart of theater can relate to this wholeheartedly. I know I did! I ...
Apr 4, 2020 -
Re: Relevance
This was an interesting read! I really liked your imagery and word choice here. A few honorable mentions to add onto what EthanHoover mentioned: "pessimist", "seductress", "residuary". The overall ton
Apr 2, 2020 -
Re: Silenced
This is awesome! What I admire about this is your word choice—words such as "yielding", "induced", "revolt" "deviation", "purge", "vacuum", and so on. It gave off this cold, condemning, and ...
Apr 2, 2020