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ok it looks like a difficult plot to have but i hope it turns out well!!and stuff_ timea already got the mistakes, so nice Z_

:) sounds pretty good makes me want to read it badly!!!! :D

oh I forgot to mention....i noticed that you used the names biggs and wedge....these are names from star wars. do you like star wars? I love it.

so yeah both mine and timeas stories are connected to anyone that was wondering. thank you, that hopefully clears some things up. :) pm me if you have any more ...

umm..the s-14 will be other times, to say the least. the 2 ships never collided..and i shall work on the five senses thing in other chapters, that's a good recommendation ...

you are right: i do need to work on seperating the two personalities. however, the skirmish wasn't too important to make much longer. I'm glad that you enjoyed it!

thanks for finally logging on and reading my book. part 2 is now posted!

thanks part 2 will be out soon!!! thank you all!! :) the story is mucho better now.

hm.. we shall see how this turns out, but it sounds good :D

ok thats ok i like opinion, though cere doesnt have money cause hes a tech genious he can fly a ship because he is a tech genious :)

kitty15: a 14-yr old is strong enough to drive a car, why not a ship? and Cere is a tech genious. gaswas, the currency in the almega galaxy, is diff ...

thank you I'm glad that you liked it jabber and tim :)

:D a new and good addition to the SW universe!

ok im new..i feel confident and have already begun part 1! :D

jabber yes this is related to timea s books in fact when this series ends, timeas series begins...... :)