nightflyer

thanks for the input. This was just a sudden idea in my head that I put down on paper. I know this isn't my best work, but thanks for reading ...

welcome ^_^!!!!!!

Ironnovelist why must you be so good at everything? I got so caught up in the story that i didn't even pay attention to errors. It was great, entertaining and ...

Yet we fight for the same purpose. Our story was left unfinished, I believe that we should end it.

Rissymay, first of all i told you very clearly not to read my writing!!! Thank you for the comments, I told you that i didn't like it and i didn't ...

Thank you so much for the review. I know I left out a lot and made it confusing, but I wrote this right before I went to sleep, and then ...

Thank you so much for the review. I just came up with the random idea, I didn't really spend much time on it, which was a mistake on my part ...

I really like your poem. The way you describe is so interesting, and even though it's just a poem i'm drawn in and entranced by this cold and mysterious corpse. ...

Hey thanks for the reply T.I.N. you can probably realize that i'm not a professional writer but i'll try to do better. I think that a better format would be ...

I really liked how you incorrperated how it led others to freedom. Maybe try to make the writing flow together. I think that you could have done a better job ...