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Re: Monster
Wow. That was a very depressing story! I agree with most of the people on here, the format of your writing is a little hard to understand, it kind of ...
May 26, 2008 -
Re: Burned
Oh.. my.. God. I loved it! So far, that is the best one I have read. I was so interested in it, that when my computer dinged to tell me ...
May 26, 2008 -
Re: Chapter 1 of "Thrills of Barcelona"
That is definitely original! That is good. I disagree with spaced_out. I could not imagine Barney telling that story. Not at all. There was some parts in the story of ...
May 26, 2008 -
Re: Sourblood
That was pretty good. There was one mistake that caught my eye though, just to tell you. Where you said " and by then they were all to intoxicated to ...
May 26, 2008 -
Re: Tick...Tick...Boom.
That was an incredible story! :D I loved how it grabbed my attenchion right away. There were a few punctuation errors I saw, but other than that, I loved it! ...
May 26, 2008