nichole_kram

Wow. That was a very depressing story! I agree with most of the people on here, the format of your writing is a little hard to understand, it kind of ...

Oh.. my.. God. I loved it! So far, that is the best one I have read. I was so interested in it, that when my computer dinged to tell me ...

That is definitely original! That is good. I disagree with spaced_out. I could not imagine Barney telling that story. Not at all. There was some parts in the story of ...

That was pretty good. There was one mistake that caught my eye though, just to tell you. Where you said " and by then they were all to intoxicated to ...

That was an incredible story! :D I loved how it grabbed my attenchion right away. There were a few punctuation errors I saw, but other than that, I loved it! ...