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Totally makes sense, I am glad I was helpful!

Thank you for the thorough response, alliyah! Your explanation of the "she" part of the poem definitely cleared up my confusion, and that method of contrasting present/future tense makes a ...

Of course! And I think it is good that you left the ending more open if you do end up coming back to it and adding on (it makes it ...

Yay, I'm glad this helped! :)

You%u2019re welcome! And I also saw the relationship between Cara and Odessa, I just figured there was also a more metaphorical relationship between the Odessas - but thanks for clarifying, ...

Of course! Hmm...I think Issac%u2019s injury didn%u2019t have a huge emotional impact on me (considerig the fact that I don%u2019t have a big connection to him) but it was a ...

Thank you for your review, Mangline! When it comes to poetry, capitalization is optional, and that is why I decided not to use it - I thought the vulnerable parts ...

Thank you!

Thank you for your review! It is nice to have a fresh pair of eyes looking at the line breaks because I feel like I am not the best at ...

THANK YOU SO MUCH

Thanks for your review! Although I decided to not capitalize words due to my writing preferences, I understand that other may prefer capitalizing, so it was nice hearing your perspective. ...

Thank you!

Thanks for the review!

Thank you! I chose to not capitalize the I%u2019s for stylistic reasons. :D

Thanks for your review, Katnes! I actually decided not to capitalize because I thought it suited the style of this poem better, but I might consider capitalizing words! I%u2019ll definitely ...