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Re: (Revised) confusion.
The second to last stanza originally featured the gender-confused purple lion, but I decided to change it to fit more with the theme of the poem. Thanks for the gold ...
Aug 10, 2008 -
Re: the sounds of my summer.
Wow, five stars! Featured work, too. Thanks! Wow.
Aug 10, 2008 -
Re: the sounds of my summer.
Wow, haha. I didn't know it was that good. Thanks! That really really means a lot.
Aug 9, 2008 -
Re: confused.
Thank you all for your replies =] The last stanza was meant to show about the confession a depressed person might feel, although I didn't like it very much either. ...
Aug 9, 2008