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Very close, actually there is a hope for an answer. There are a few things the poem is meant to mean, but generally I like it to be somewhat interpreted ...

Thanks, no it's not Uzbek; it is a conlang. Anyway the predicament is not being able to get close to the tree, as hard as you might try, and waiting ...

Thanks man, that means alot.

Dark Flame makes me think of Dark Knight. In more serious tone though, I liked how you used flame to mean something else. It's not hard to figure out what ...

Do you mean this would probably fit an older audience? Maybe part of the confusion was that this was written for a Christian audience.

Seen someone die lately? Yay! Anyway I liked it. Some parts of it did seem cliche but it reminded me that death is supposed to be sad, so thumbs up ...

seven days ago is making a reference to wholeness or a whole period like a year. Almost like saying once I was sane but now I'm not.