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Re: Everytime I look at You
Hey! Did you know that the rule is that you have to critique someone else's work twice before you post anything yourself? It's better that way- so you can get ...
Apr 4, 2008 -
Re: The Final Performance of the Night
This is really good! Maybe add more description to it to make it more compelling. :) I've got some things to critique on, grammar-wise... They've all gathered to see my ...
Apr 4, 2008 -
Re: The Lesson
HEY SPIKER!!! :P Nice, this is AWESOME! :) Besides spelling "knees" "kness", which I know was just a typo, there's nothiing else that I see needs changing. Are you gonna ...
Apr 4, 2008 -
Re: Killing For Colour (re-make)
Awesome job! I love the description used throughout the piece. The beginning really drew me in to the story and reading it left me wanting more. I love it! :D ...
Mar 25, 2008