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Prokaryote , thank you for reading, Leebass , thank you for reviewing. Ballard is Ballard, insane sci-fi brits are insane sci-fi brits (brilliant as they are), in this case I ...

Thanx uncle jimmy!

On contre, dear Jashie, this is the preliminary version, just to exhibit something while I was working on the rest. And the aforementioned rest is in Advanced Critiques only... yup... ...

Hey, just read it: I like the premise! Very Philip Jose Farmer type of beginning, which in my book is always welcome. I have just three major point-out issues: a) ...

Hey, carelessaussie13, your comment is one every writer dreams of reading. You made my day! Evening, that is. You're very generous, I can see quite well that that my text ...

OK, here's the reuploaded version. Just to use this opportunity to draw your attention to the quote by Gaiman down below, that most likely my ideas for how to make ...

Too right Sponk, as it is, it ain't elegant enough to be read for the joy of reading, and there aren't any hooks to hold the wandering attention of the ...

Yup, this was very amusing. Care to turn it into a longer piece set in a world inhabited by frogs and maybe other sentient critters? That'd be fun :smt002

Well, truth be said I don't really have a burning inspiration for the short juvenile novellas, I'm rather doing it a bit mechanically, on autopilot. But I've meditated, I've outlined ...

Thanx for the review, Seeminglymeaningless, everything /more or less/ I think I'll be able to set straight as I really do finish this novella, but the style jump... well... In ...

Ooh, aah, eeh, Griffinkeeper :D Good points all, logical. They only have resources for ships this size, they move along in a generational pace: send the first batch, when in ...

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Ah, I mean the progressive protestant and anglican sects of the day, naturally, and mystics like the theosophists, christian transcendentalists, etc. The 19th century progressive 'weirdoes', not the m

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