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Thanx uncle jimmy!
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Great writing!!!
Hey, carelessaussie13, your comment is one every writer dreams of reading. You made my day! Evening, that is.
You're very generous, I can see quite well that that my text is sloppy in places, I'll have to edit it at some point, and I have no idea where I'm going with it... I believe it will be a paralell project, through which I let off steam whilst trying to learn to write other stuff, so new chapters will appear perhaps on a weekly, perhaps on a monthly basis. I think every chapter will be a road to Rome by a different road, with comments on the view, the conversations, thoughts and events on the way.
Thank again. I will check out your stuff of course, oh who am I kidding, I already did, and to throw the same ball back at you - I'm very curious where you're going with this. Please PM me when you've done the third chapter, and I will definitely, absolutely do a real-real review:)
My friend, this is pure unadulterated genius. As writers we are always looking for ways to go where no pen has gone before and by golly you've done it. Honestly, I cannot think of anything constructive to say except go forth and seek an agent. And also keep writing because I'm desperate to know where you could possibly be going with such a beginning. And also if you're ever bored I'd love to hear what you have to say about my most recent stuff, which is in this same forum. Okay, done. Keep writing, keep being genius.
-Aussie