nanya

Thanks :) i'll fix it.

Noted. Thanks for the review :)

Noted :) thanks for the review.

imagine its a conversation with someone.. the person will loose interest even before you get to the middle of the poem. i'm just saying, focus on lesser things so your ...

thanks for the review.

Noted. Thanks for taking time to review my poem. i appreciate it :)

Noted. :) thanks for taking the time to review.

Thanks for the review :) it was a typing error.

Thanks A lot :)

i never met any of my grand dads so i kinda understand where you are coming from. nice poem.