mystymizer

I am more than pleased and THANK YOU to all of my reviewers, all of these were my best reviews yet! Thank you times a ba-jillion, thousand! This poem meant ...

I very much appreciate the review Peanut, but as said this is a 'stream of consciousness' poem ... ever read Ulysses? It's like that. No grammar or punctuation needed, the ...

Yeah really. I thought MY poems were short (I'm not making fun of you I promise) :) I do have something else to say though about this; Short clasps around ...

This poem was pretty all right, if you know what I mean. The problem I had with it was the structure which was very off when it came to syllable's. ...

I really like this poem, short, simple and the quick imagery was great. Good work. The only thing I have to say is that maybe you should think about revising ...

Thank you very much for that!!! Best comment I have received yet, and thank you for pointing out the capitalization...something I always forget as I quickly type! Yes spoons is ...

This is amazing and it seems as though everybody else has already commenting on whatever it would be that I would say needs improvement (which is hardly anything). Lovely poem, ...

Beautifully written, especially the rhyming pattern. Also loved the idea behind it. I don't even have any CC to say (Sorry to disappoint!). I just simply enjoyed reading this! Great ...