Thank you very much for that!!! Best comment I have received yet, and thank you for pointing out the capitalization...something I always forget as I quickly type! Yes spoons is pushing it, I can see exactly where your coming from...that's more of a personal thing (the fact I play spoons for no reason constantly^^) but understandable how a reader would be like...okay...spoons, what?? You have a good eye, two of my rhyme's were definately forced (the rest were not...or so I believe). The words acquiesce and austere were ones I had to throw in there that maybe threw the poem off a bit...but was needed to fit the scheme! Thank you very much for your comment, I will keep them all in mind and tone down my randomness in the future and edit my poem here with your corrections in mind.
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