mystical*dragons

Hey Nefer, you're my new best friend:) Thank you so much!

Thanks you guys. I'm glad you like it. I'll be posting more in a few days, I'll be looking forward to your opinion :)

The phone is ringing, piercing through a galaxy of dreams, a world away. Ignoring the phone, I turn over on my back, and then abruptly sit up on the bed, ...

Hey, thanx for the nice comments! I'm glad people liked it. And yes, it is something I experienced, well not exactly, in my case, the guy didn't die. This was ...

This is so good, I agree with areida, its flawless. Good job!

This was really nice, i love the last two lines. Keep writing! :)

This was really good, but I dont know, I had sort of guessed the end. So it wasn't that surprising for me. Anyway, good job! :)

Oooh, I loved this. This was really good. You really brought the kid character to life. Great story.

this was great...i rarely like poems...and i just loved this...just one typo though...corpes should be corpse...anyway...great job!

this was great...i really liked it...i haven't read the first one...i think i'll go read it now...

wow...this is a great story...you relayed the feelings so was just...PERFECT! :)

hey, thank you for all the nice comments...i'm suprised to see anyone liked it, since i've started writing after a BIG gap of 2-3 years..and to answer your question...the guy ...

hey, thank you for all the nice comments...i'm suprised to see anyone liked it, since i've started writing after a BIG gap of 2-3 years..and to answer your question...the guy ...