myrisha

This is a awkward but good poem. Love is like that sometimes. It's complicated and full of emotions. One minute they are in love and the next they aren't. I ...

I don't get every single line that I read in this but the message is overall clear. You have good beat and style that works great. I like the last ...

This was a different interesting view point. I didn't expect the story to read the way it did. Of course there were some grammar problems but it didn't take attention ...

I am writing this because I wrote a story filled with dialogue just like yours. I didn't see the problem until everyone told me it was too much. You need ...

At first I wasn't sure where you were going with the writing but then I understood the story unfolding. This has so much truth and brings a revelation of human ...

I'm not the biggest harry potter fan but I like your poem. It really does make me feel a sense of belonging to the world she created with the books ...