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ok, thank you

can you give me an example?

Of course I'm glad to help. And I never sugar coat anything [even if it makes me look like a [insert well known cuss word here] because I feel like ...

I might have. Thanks for clearing it all up.

ok cool, thanks for clearing all that up. I would suggest maybe making it a bit clearer that when he's taken from the van that he cant see, that would ...

thank you, I'm glad you liked my writing.

Ok, well thanks for the advice.

Of course, always glad to help

I would love to be tagged. And I'm so glad I was able to help out and you didn't find it harsh. I always fear that people are going to ...

thank you for the review, to clarify a few things. This is definitely going to be the end to my story and the link that's titled prologue will with out ...

thank you so much for your review. I hope you read the rest.

thank you so much for your review, I'm actually glad you liked it since I wrote under the heavy influence of caffeine around one in the morning. I can definitely ...

Ok, well I'm not sure if you've read my line-by-line review or not, but the main parts of dialogue I felt that should be separated are distinguished in there. I ...

Thank you so much for review. About the 200 years earlier part: in a sense the man does apply to the story but he's not really that important. In-fact this ...

I want to say thank you again, your review helped a lot as I went back and edited my first chapter. About the two different name things: Ivy is pretty ...