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Ok,i see what you are saying, and like i have tolled someone before you i have been wotking on this for two years and i am still not finished working ...

ok, thank you for comment. I do know that people thought the main character was a guy but your right its a she. Secound of all she is half-vampire and ...

I know that sometimes it is hard to create song lyrics. It takes time and patience. Good luck

thank you again. I may have to find a few of the other drafts for you and find a way to get them to you but I promise if that's ...

Thank you for your perspective and I can see were you are coming from with the guy sounding a little like the girl. I can fix that part, however the ...

ok so this is not supposed to be a diary entry, it is supposed to be some kind of background from the characters perspective. I promise the rest isn't like ...

thank you, good luck with your writing.

Thank you so much, you were very helpful. I have been working on this piece of work for like two years now, and I am still not content with it. ...

thank you for feedback, I believe that it was really helpful. However there are a couple of things I would like to say. 1)About the prologue thing, the reason for ...

thank you for feedback, I believe that it was really helpful. However there are a couple of things I would like to say. 1)About the prologue thing, the reason for ...

thank you for feedback, I believe that it was really helpful. However there are a couple of things I would like to say. 1)About the prologue thing, the reason for ...

thank you for feedback, I believe that it was really helpful. However there are a couple of things I would like to say. 1)About the prologue thing, the reason for ...

well to me it seemed great for how fast it was written

I like this, it is somewhat short and all but it still seems very well written and thought out. I love this. Some may say it is to underdeveloped but ...

"Sorry everyone, for some reason the paragraphs got separated." never mind got it fixed