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Wasn't a let down, still think your a really good writer

thank you and I am glad you liked it even though I still need to work on showing. I do have other stories in Wattpad if you would like to ...

Peace Girl Friend. If this is what you want then take it, just know that we are only here to help you not hurt you.

Thank you. I fully understand all the points you made clear and I will definitely take that into consideration.

No problem, glad I helped. That is why I am here. As well I can't wait until you post the second half, hope you don't mind if I review that ...

I totally understand, and if you don't want to change how you start your story then you don't have to. It was just a suggestion, but as a suggestion I ...

that's great and your welcome.

thank you. :)

Of course, that's what I am here for isn't it. Glad I helped.

Wow this is like so amazing. I really like it a lot. You like literally drew me in right from the start and I don't normally say that for most ...

that makes sense, I am sorry if I may offended you. However I still like this poem, it is beautiful.

*Throws hand up in the air* Yes! I am so happy that you liked my characters names. In all honesty I wrote this last night around one in the morning ...

That's kind of what I was thinking. I was also thinking of a way to show how both of their experinces with homicide wouldn't have prepared them for this.

thank you, and actually I was thinking of countinuing this chapter, I just don't know were to go with it.

Alyssa is actually based off of one of my very best friends and trust me she yells alot