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Thanks. I finished the fixing part. I probable do need to go back and revise again. Thanks again, -Amber

I have to point out two reviews before you post. Really cute poem though.

look at your private messages. I exclaimed.

Yes, incorporate more. Who are these 'friends' you speak of in this work and what are they called? It's so confusing. Is it set in a Halloween ish town or ...

Um... This sounds like the old Halloween movie except there's now a reason why the little borother might kill her now. It's a very interesting story line. Very catching. Every ...

I just read it because I had it and it kept me reading. I was really bored and had no particuar intrests in any book at the time...

Revised and even with a title. :D * A Revolutionary Monument A time of pirates The life of Zen Blackheart Rewritten and slightly retold by, Your student only, Amber Coultis ...

Oh! Okay. *Hey I bet yourt raking up points just by answering my questions. :D *

Is that supposed to n=be a ship? It looks so dinky...

Hey, I have been hearing about this sore subject for more than two weeks. It gets old eventually so bare with me on my sadness. :( I shall try... Thanks ...

I'm not quite sure exactly. I'm about to add on to it though for you to tell me anything I missed on the others. And yes the last one on ...

Thanks? :smt017 Um... My character Zen is righting it from her point of veiw and this isn't a story we were suposed to do diary entrys and mine ended up ...

As nate said there is a bug in this. The food part isn't supossed to looke like that.... I'll see if I can go fix it.

I am about to go to the editing but how is it like Twilight?

I just got this yesterday and I thought the first mabey six chapters were great. That's all I have to say right now on this. :D