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I have to agree that it was funny, well...yeah funny and ryhmed but......I don't know never mind... -em

I agree with periwikle^ -em

Hum mabe that explanes me......I don't know..... I like it....the ruined picture perfect would never compare to a picture perfect..... -em (O ya go mizz iceberg!!!)(;

Oh.....I like. from far off I see the waves The ocean.... And the sea...... ^ < great I don't know what to say ...(other than that^)

Go overeasy!!*claps* I liked the way you described in it. I thought the end was sweet but I do have to agree whensomeones right it did throw it off a ...

I was just wondering.....don't get me wrong though I do like it. -em I thought it was cute how they proved every onr wrong

center is spelld wrong... Hey are they gay? Just wondering.... -em

I do agree with L_A but I also have to say that for the first chapter that was long....well I have to go I have map testing tommarrow bye>.< -em

prayer is spelled but i really like it...how the main character has a wispering subconcience...most of the books I read don't have that. Again good job. -em

thanks -em

ok i'm trying....i'll fix the spelling real quick and she still fells resentment to vampires and it soon slips off...Woops I kinda' told a peice that's coming up.... thanks. -em

I'd have to interpret that as a very evil child..... But I like it. It kinda' cunfuzzed me in the beging but... over all great and good luck here...... -em

Great but you know if you add in to the day with out bursts of funny but randum crap it's more fun for others and posible you to....*just a thought...* ...

lol. That's to good....*giggle* Nice, that was great+.+ -em

That is a very interesting peice. Ilike it.+.+ -em