mybrokenreality

Thanks you guys^^ That was really helpful, and I think I'll try combining your two methods a little. I like the stanza's Rain created but also like the drama TPak ...

Hi! Thanks! :D Hmm...I understand what you mean and you're right. If I changed it, it would be a little better, wouldn't it? Ha, that was my favorite part too! ...

Yeah, after about an hour of utter frustration I gave up trying. Ha, I'm actually writing in my journal now. =)

Hmmm...I really liked it! It was interesting to read, the way it told a story. :D

Really? Thanks! :D

Thanks!^^ I actually just wrote one of my best pieces yesterday and its being featured! Haha, its called I'm Trying. You can check it out if you'd like to. =)

Haha, I know what you mean. I sat there writing this and thinking 'This really STINKS.' It didn't have too much to it that I liked myself but I figured, ...

Wow...I logged on and saw all these great reviews. It made me smile! :D I'm really glad so many people liked it, considering it was one of those, spur of ...

Loved it! =) Can't wait for the next chapter!

This was pretty awesome. It flowed very well, and made me want to keep reading. Overall, I liked it! Keep it up! :D ~mybrokenreality

That was sweet. I can't believe you did that in 1st or 2nd grade! If you could do that then, you must be amazing now. :D

Thanks! :D

Hmmm....thanks for the tips. I'm going to look into everything you said, its really helpful. :D

I really liked this poem =) It flowed easily and showed emotion. Plus, this is the first piece of work I've read since I created an account, haha.