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  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Petals

    is this about a wedding? it's short and sweet and i like it. at first however, it did confuse me but thats just because i wasn't completely focussed. it usually ...

    Jan 6, 2008
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: I Am poetry

    my first initial is an A. my name is Anna and so i just put A instead. i'm glad you liked it. grammar is usually a big deal to me ...

    Jan 6, 2008
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: I Am poetry

    i meant grammar. but you know.

    Dec 28, 2007
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: I Am poetry

    when i type i usually don't worry about grammor unless its something for school or something really important. i'm glad you liked it buddadancer! hope everyone is having a nice ...

    Dec 28, 2007
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: I Am poetry

    I really like this, kitty. It looks like you took time to do this. Either that or you're just that good. I like the fact that it rhymes. You're very ...

    Dec 22, 2007
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: I Am poetry

    Pheobe i like how your poem went through stages of being a whore then a mother then a child. Thanks for trying it out! ya know, you can learn alittle ...

    Dec 21, 2007
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: I Am poetry

    wow.. more replies... shooting star i enjoyed yours, you sound like a dreamer....like me. Ayra, this made my night. 1+1 does indeed =2, you are right about that so maybe ...

    Dec 21, 2007
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: I Am poetry

    well we did have a school assignment for a "who am i?" poem but my teacher just gave us this outline as an example and i just filled the outline ...

    Dec 18, 2007
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: I Am poetry

    thatnks for your input but it was just something mainly for fun. I did not mean for this to seem like navel gazing and I am sorry if it seems ...

    Dec 16, 2007
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: I Am poetry

    hey good job. i like it.

    Dec 16, 2007
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: short i know

    though its short, it gets the point across. the first line doesnt exactly go with the last two but maybe if you extend it then it would.

    Dec 8, 2007
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Crushed

    you have no idea how much i can relate to this. i understand it fully. it shows alot of emotion. so good job and keep writing what you feel. =)

    Dec 2, 2007


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