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I enjoy this poem and its length; it has a propulsive energy to it. I wouldn't mind seeing an expanded version, but I agree with other reviewers that it's powerful ...

Much thanks for the review! If you'd like to check out more of my writing, I recently wrote a (longer) short story called

Thanks for the review! I got the idea for a story, but I only had a few images. Perhaps later I'll expand it.

Thanks so much for your great review! I changed a few of the "I"s in the final paragraphs; you were absolutely right.

Thank you so much for your review! I'm flattered, and pondering the opening.

Thank you SO much for the feedback and the kind words! And for catching that silly typo. :)

A sweet and haunting if not lyrical poem. The sentiments evoked - nostalgia, longing for home, loneliness - are powerful indeed, and I love the poem's simplicity. Others have talked ...

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Thank you for your review, Lauren! Your observation of that section's rhythm is duly noted, I'll have to look at changing that in subsequent drafts. I completely agree, another sentence ...

Thank you very much, this was an incredible review! I thank you for effectively and shrewdly analyzing the themes of the story. The contradiction in how beauty is represented in ...

Thank you very much for your review! The married couple line was meant to signify a (human) couple who still take walks in the park (habitually), but whose once clasped ...

Thank you very much for your review! I am glad you enjoyed it. In Word when I originally wrote it, there were barriers breaking up each segment - this has ...