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  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: His Kisses

    Okay, so I really like this one. I'm a sucker for metaphors, and this poem was full of a lot of great ones. I also love the repetition of the ...

    Sep 27, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: First Love

    I really liked this piece. It was one of those poems that's short, but very sweet. I thought you caught the emotion very well, because I know exactly how it ...

    Sep 27, 2009
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Enough

    This piece really touched me. I love how it emphasizes that love is not about looks or how smooth your skin is. It show that love is pure if you ...

    Feb 23, 2008


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