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That was veryy good. I thought some lines would be better changed though, like There’s a little picture pinned up beside my bed, And it tells a story, a story ...

i LOVED it. Gosh, that was so good. I wish I could write like that. Bravo! Great poem.

That was enjoyable in a dark way. It's deep and that's what I like about it.

Thanks Nathan. I guess I follow the writing rules too much.

That was a metaphorically nice poem even though I don't really get the thing about where water and glass meet. This was original, which is why I like it so ...

Thanks imapoemperson. And lilchoma, thanks for giving me some examples. I guess that's just proof of what a bad Christian I used to be. I say that because, even though ...

Thanks for your opinion, thedreamwalker and lilchoma. I must say, though, that I agree with thedreamwalker. I get what you're saying, lilchoma about the abortion and all that, but I ...

Thanks for your opinion, lilchoma, velvetwhispers, and lukas8u. Lilchoma-I've never thought about pedophiles or serial killers that way. I don't think serial killers are born with an inclination to ki

Thanks so much musiclover and chipsnadguacamollie. I really appreciate your comments and reviews.

Wow. That was really good. It had a great start, a fantastic ending, and was filled with rich descriptive details. I loved it.