murtuza

Hey Ahmad! I love this story and how you've described every single detail. You start by introducing Gerry, a busy woman who uses the train for the first time. The ...

Hey, Kattie! I like poems with positive outlook and a good message of hope. The only nitpick for me is that I find it to be to plain and drab. ...

Hey, sarebear! This was really fun to read and the descriptions of anticipation just leaped from my computer screen. Great work and keep those creative juices flowing! Murtuza :)

Hey Deanie, This poem sounds a lot like one that I've written and I really love the way that you've managed to bind all those emotions of feeling lost and ...

Deanie :D I can so empathize with you on this! For me, chocolate is just sweet love and warmness and I feel happy after having a good wrapper or maybe ...

Deanie! This is such a great poem! I'm so impressed with the use of the words and situation that you are trying to portray. The story you're telling here is ...

Scarlett! As promised, I am here to review! This poem is short indeed but really delves into Gabrielle's despair. However, it becomes a bit too repetitive when you keep say ...

Hey, Mello! I love this poem a lot. I don't understand a single word of Spanish but I'm glad you translated the poem into English as well because this is ...

Hey there, form! This poem is really good and really delves into the subject really well. To live an existence worthy of a human being and living among God's wonderful ...

Hey, uncharted! This poem has some great metaphorical usage and it all comes along seamlessly. The transitions from being such a beautiful day from the "orange covered paths" to the ...

Hey there, Charity! I like the extreme dramatization and the imagery you've managed to capture. Your creative mind has great ways of expressing itself since it makes such great descriptions ...

Hi Audy! Wow, who knew that eating a pizza could get so intense? You've managed to get into the heart of the darkness that today's social forums portray and encourage. ...

Hey there, Unmarked! I like this poem a lot for the great use of imagery and the entire conception about this. I'm not one for giving much critique, but as ...

Hey, Carefree! Firstly, welcome to YWS! I'm glad you joined this community! And congratulations on your first post. A really great one at that too! This poem is so sweet ...

Mikko! this is hilarious fun! I'm so lol-ed up right now. xD But seriously, if I had a ticket to heaven, then I'd definitely give it to you! God bless, ...