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Re: Never Give Up
thanks for pointing out the mistakes I will try not to make them again in my next story
Jul 23, 2019 -
Re: Never Give Up
thanks for the review , it really made me see where I made a mistake . I will try to not make the same mistake next time #mthanmark
Jul 21, 2019 -
Re: Peace no longer exists
I love the way you express how the world has no peace ,your poem really spoke to me . Specially stanza 7 when it speaks about how man are enslaved ...
Jul 20, 2019 -
Re: No Escape
It is an enjoyable story it got anxious to know how it would end . This was my first story reading and it was exciting . You are really talented
Jul 20, 2019 -
Re: To My Dear Teacher
nice poem you really talented ,how do you do it ?
Jul 19, 2019