mthanmark263

thanks for the review next time I will focus on grammar. When I find time I will fix it

EverLight thanks for helping me with my mistakes

thank you

what a dream wow I think I should also write my dreams down from now on please can you give any tips to writing a creative story

wow nice work

really cool

You really good at what you do.

Hi it is mthanmark263 to do a review and can I just say really cool story. You really talented because this was an amazing and interesting story to read. It ...

Hi it is mthanmark263 here and can I just say I love your poem so much it is so true and interesting to read. First of all the beginning starts ...

Also thank you for the tip

Hey xJade wow this is such an amazing poem. What I like from this poem is that it is different in a good way, the words rhyme and I really ...

thanks, at least when I am given an English assignment about poems i will be able to write one that is exciting

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I really enjoyed this poem. I love that it has short lines and has that rhythm it says a lot of things and links with the title. Wow you really ...

thanks for the review I will try to fix and improve my mistakes

thanks I will start doing that