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  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: Finnegans Wake (James Joyce)

    Just to add: I studied Joyce all last year and, by the end, I was loving it. This might change if i ever read Ulysses... Anyway, bear in mind the ...

    Sep 13, 2009
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, General Re: Faith in the Fayth

    Hmmm. FFX is my second most favourite game of all time (after FF7 :)) But I HATE X2. Can't stand the thing. I might be a little biased. I agree ...

    Aug 30, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: To Be Like Jesus

    Hey. You seem to have attracted a lot of interest with this. Awesome! But I'm afraid I'm going to be one of the unhelpful ones. The only thing I can ...

    Aug 29, 2009
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: Worst Book You've Ever Read

    Aaagh. How can you dislike Mortal Engines? It was my favourite book as a kid. I don't even care that Shrike was the Terminator and that the next three books ...

    Aug 26, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: God is..

    Hey. My first review on new YWS. How exciting. You'll hate me for this but I really don't have much to say about the text. I'd agree, maybe, that the ...

    Aug 23, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, General Re: The Dalek Doctor - Part 1

    Wooster's right, it was so long. I did love it, but because of the length, I'm not going to go into everything. I did notice a few typos and errors ...

    Jul 19, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Yes, this is Delicious Soup

    Hey there. This was good. Not that much to review. I thought that the last couple of lines of dialogue was a little forced, but then, I guess that it ...

    Jun 22, 2009
  • Other » General, General Re: Romeo and Juliet: In Everyday English (1.1b)

    Hello again! I read. I laughed. I still love how you're presenting good old benvolio. Shock, though, at your cutting all those oxymorons. "Here's much to do with hate, but ...

    Jun 21, 2009
  • Other » General, General Re: Romeo and Juliet: In Everyday English (1.1a)

    Pure genius! Seriously. Much funnier than the twilight spoofs still clogging up fanfic and scripts. Kudos. I think my favourite is the way you drew Tybalt. Please continue with this ...

    Jun 19, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Journey

    Hey there! Shall we review? Firslty, I have to agree with outofthebox. Your story wasn't that confusing but I don't know how much I could really relate your extended metaphor ...

    Jun 19, 2009
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Vampire Super Models

    Yay I’m the first to review. I’m a faithful fan, I’ve decided. Anyhoo, usual rules: After I got home I rode the elevator up to my room which was on ...

    Jun 18, 2009
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Vampire Super Models

    Hello again! I found chapter two. yay! I have every faith its going to be as good as chapter one. shall we see? I thought I felt my heart skip ...

    May 27, 2009
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Vampire Super Models

    Hi, I found you! Am I too late to review? We seem to have been especially thorough with you. This is a good thing. Firstly, I loved this. I’ve had ...

    May 22, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Heartless, a book im starting, please help with editing

    Hi there. you've had soem thorough crits already so I'm not going to go all the way through. my pointers would be on making sure that the intro. doesn't drag. ...

    May 20, 2009
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Who are you?

    Who are you? I see you there Always at the back Hiding your face in the shadows Of the people who you follow (Here, I might cut the “who”) You ...

    Apr 23, 2009


i like that the title of dr jekyll and mr hyde makes a clear stance that the embodiment of one’s own evil doesn’t get a claim to the doctorate
— waywardxwallflower