mrsdamonsalvatore

Thank you again for your review. I sometimes find it hard to find my mistakes and picture my story as others would see it so this will be a huge ...

Thank you for your review, I understand what your saying I just find it hard to find my own mistakes sometimes. That's why I publish them on here to get ...

This is really good I like the way you've written it. I also like how it's written from a metaphorical view. I don't think I could have done that, and ...

This sounds really good and I think your a great writer And have a lot of potential, well done.

I really like this, it's really good. Well done