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Not too old-fashioned at all! I actually really loved the wording because it wasn't the standard dialect we use to speak, and given it's poetry, makes complete sense.

Thank you very much! I agree 100% with your suggested wording changes.

Lol

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Does each letter stand for another or is it a different kind of encryption?

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Thank you!! And yes, I agree with all your comments and this chapter was written a bit rushed lol so I will definitely be editing about that

Thank you very much I love your suggestions!

Your comments about my characters are usually spot on and it makes me very happy to ready them!! Thank you again!

Thank you again! And yes, rebuild is a word often used in reference to fires. And I appreciate your reviews, they are very helpful!

I plan on keeping the number formatting. I may come up with names later but for not it%u2019s not a plan. Also, thank you for your reviews! You are very ...

Okay, thank you!

Thank you for this review it is very helpful! I do have to ask, was it hard to follow because of the destination time skips or do you believe I ...

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