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In all honesty, I meant the meaning of 'lime' as the type of stone, but I hadn't even noticed that parallel, lol!! And thank you for your review!

Thank you for your review!! I love your suggestions and I will look into editing it to fix those clunky sections and plot holes.

I love that suggestion! Thank you for your review.

Thank you!!!

Thank you so much for this review!

Thank you again!! I love your suggestion! And, I am sure your writing is amazing too. Everyone writes in different styles so I think its always hard to compare who's ...

@Honora Do I tag you like this? I'm not entirely sure how this site works yet...

Wow, thank you again for this amazing review. I love your advice and suggestions, and I will definitely keep that in mind in both future writing and editing. Thank you!

Wow, thank you for this wonderful review!! I love your advice on varying the beginning words of sentences from the grammatically incorrect "And" and "But" and I will definitely strive ...

Wow! I loved this! And thank you for your suggestion!!

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Thank you for your feedback!

Thank you for this!