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  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: Freshly Turned Grave

    In all honesty, I meant the meaning of 'lime' as the type of stone, but I hadn't even noticed that parallel, lol!! And thank you for your review!

    Sun Jan 10, 2021 2:42 am
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: Freshly Turned Grave

    Thank you for your review!! I love your suggestions and I will look into editing it to fix those clunky sections and plot holes.

    Sat Jan 09, 2021 4:12 am
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: Freshly Turned Grave

    I love that suggestion! Thank you for your review.

    Fri Jan 08, 2021 8:23 pm
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Dramatic Re: Cusp of Insanity

    Thank you!!!

    Fri Jan 08, 2021 6:28 pm
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: Puppet Show

    Thank you so much for this review!

    Thu Jan 07, 2021 5:52 am
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Prophecy of Thieves [chapter 3]

    Thank you again!! I love your suggestion! And, I am sure your writing is amazing too. Everyone writes in different styles so I think its always hard to compare who's ...

    Wed Jan 06, 2021 10:12 pm
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Prophecy of Thieves [chapter 3]

    @Honora Do I tag you like this? I'm not entirely sure how this site works yet...

    Tue Jan 05, 2021 8:26 pm
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Prophecy of Thieves [chapter 2]

    Wow, thank you again for this amazing review. I love your advice and suggestions, and I will definitely keep that in mind in both future writing and editing. Thank you!

    Tue Jan 05, 2021 5:39 am
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Prophecy of Thieves [chapter 1]

    Wow, thank you for this wonderful review!! I love your advice on varying the beginning words of sentences from the grammatically incorrect "And" and "But" and I will definitely strive ...

    Tue Jan 05, 2021 5:33 am
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: Puppet Show

    Wow! I loved this! And thank you for your suggestion!!

    Mon Jan 04, 2021 9:47 pm
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Dramatic Re: Cusp of Insanity

    Thank you so much!!

    Mon Jan 04, 2021 3:57 pm
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Dramatic Re: Cusp of Insanity

    Thank you!!

    Mon Jan 04, 2021 3:55 pm
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Dramatic Re: Cusp of Insanity

    Thank you so much!

    Mon Jan 04, 2021 4:06 am
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Dramatic Re: Cusp of Insanity

    Thank you for your feedback!

    Mon Jan 04, 2021 3:02 am
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Dramatic Re: Cusp of Insanity

    Thank you for this!

    Mon Jan 04, 2021 2:10 am


The same boiling water that softens the potato hardens the egg. It's about what you're made of, not the circumstances.
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