monkeyscott236rz

I like your poem because you wrote about how you felt about the monsters and the world. I must say though you shouldn't write in a poem what you would ...

This is very goof but you are not really describing the pain. You say it is in your face. Is it clear? Or just there? You should probably use different ...

WOW! It was like I was there and was the drug addict. I felt the pierce in my veins just by reading it. I felt like I was under the ...

This is the first poem I read on this site I swear. It was the reason I even signed up. It lured me into think that I would get really ...

Really good. I must say you should actually post this on you tube with you singing it with a musical background.

It is good but you must focus more on trying to grab the readers attention. I got kinda bored at the beginning and stopped. You have to grab at the ...