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  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, General Re: Unexpected-Chapter Two

    Me and my friend were reading your story and when we got to the end we didn't want it to be over!! Jeez you've got me hooked! :) Now there ...

    Jan 9, 2016
  • Short Story » General, Romantic Re: Back To Ashes

    This was so sad, emotional and a great read! I loved the way you took some of life's most challenging subjects and wrapped them into this story. I would suggest ...

    Dec 29, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, General Re: Unexpected-Chapter One

    A moment of silence for this amazing beginning please!! I love it!! The story line makes sense, the characters seem exciting, the story is building!!! Love it, love it. Just ...

    Dec 27, 2015
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Never Seen

    This is so beautiful! I could see the colors you described, and the way he interacted with her. Each image in my mind was dazzling. Thank you for that. : ...

    Nov 21, 2015
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Romantic Re: The End of Us

    This was amazing!! I could totally feel the emotion through the whole story, and it felt so real! I loved the ending, it was a perfect closure. Just a few ...

    Nov 17, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Perch: Chapter 1

    Wow this story really got me! I really enjoyed all the emotion woven into it, and how you started it out. Honestly, I'm a sucker for sad stories and endings. ...

    Nov 10, 2015
  • Short Story » Romantic, Realistic Re: Where We Left Off

    Wow, I loved this story! Most of the short stories I've read have been extremely predictable, but this ending was not. LOVED IT!!!! One thing that I think could use ...

    Nov 6, 2015


He began to wonder why he had felt uneasy at all. It was like a man wondering in broad daylight why a dream had appeared so terrible to him at night.
— Chinua Achebe, Things Fall Apart