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Re: Unexpected-Chapter Two
Me and my friend were reading your story and when we got to the end we didn't want it to be over!! Jeez you've got me hooked! :) Now there ...
Jan 9, 2016 -
Re: Back To Ashes
This was so sad, emotional and a great read! I loved the way you took some of life's most challenging subjects and wrapped them into this story. I would suggest ...
Dec 29, 2015 -
Re: Unexpected-Chapter One
A moment of silence for this amazing beginning please!! I love it!! The story line makes sense, the characters seem exciting, the story is building!!! Love it, love it. Just ...
Dec 27, 2015 -
Re: Never Seen
This is so beautiful! I could see the colors you described, and the way he interacted with her. Each image in my mind was dazzling. Thank you for that. : ...
Nov 21, 2015 -
Re: The End of Us
This was amazing!! I could totally feel the emotion through the whole story, and it felt so real! I loved the ending, it was a perfect closure. Just a few ...
Nov 17, 2015 -
Re: The Perch: Chapter 1
Wow this story really got me! I really enjoyed all the emotion woven into it, and how you started it out. Honestly, I'm a sucker for sad stories and endings. ...
Nov 10, 2015 -
Re: Where We Left Off
Wow, I loved this story! Most of the short stories I've read have been extremely predictable, but this ending was not. LOVED IT!!!! One thing that I think could use ...
Nov 6, 2015
