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Re: The Norm
You can relate to this. It's beautiful, no changes needed. Keep it the way it is, i dont care what anybody says.
Nov 2, 2010 -
Re: End of the Year Thoughts
Good. But, it seem's like you would have to be close friends with you to understand it. Help the reader understand it better, give it more detail and feeling. Other ...
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Re: STanding in my shadow
THANK YOU FOR READING IT OMG!:D wow, ok well its one of those coincidental moments with her, the boy walks over. this between them is ment to be. I have ...
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Re: A poem about you.
Beautiful. It has feeling. I love it.
Nov 2, 2010 -
Re: Chance Happenings - Prologue + Chapter 1
This is really good. And descriptive, and just.. keeps you wanting more. Dont be so hard on yourself, I didnt see any mistakes and this book is really good. Keep ...
Nov 2, 2010