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I loved your story it was fantastic! I am not sure what I liked most about it maybe just the plot and characters so far, but it was great. The ...

Thank you so much

Thank you so much, the reason I didn't add more was because it was for school and could only be three pages

I really like it, but would you consider making it longer.

Thank you so much

I really liked it, would you consider adding some more character description. Over all great job.